I need help from our smartest members. I need your help settling a dispute.
When included, and referring to the photo can the sentence below the photo be grammatically correct?
AKARA WATCHING HER DADDY CUT ROSES.
I need help from our smartest members. I need your help settling a dispute.
When included, and referring to the photo can the sentence below the photo be grammatically correct?
AKARA WATCHING HER DADDY CUT ROSES.
I am no grammar whiz but the only thing I can think of is to have an ‘is’ between Akara and Watching?
I am not too sure though, the current sentence seems correct because you are describing something that has happened already, and not something happening presently.
CORRECTION: AKARA IS WATCHING HER OLD MAN PIMP OUT THE ROSES.
Hmmm…interesting.
So, as a caption, and if there was a comma after Akara then it would be absolutely correct?
Anybody else second this?
As a caption, this sentence checks out gramatically. If it was not a caption, the tense would need to be changed to ‘Akara watches’ in order to be gramatically correct. I see no need for the comma. It could be placed there, but I don’t think it’s more or less correct either way.
My first thoughts were to add the comma also.
Great, thoughtful feedback. Thanks much:)
I found a spelling error.
AKARA WATCHING HER DADDY CUT ROSELIA.
The original caption is fine. No comma is necessary.
If this were a caption intended for a newspaper, magazine or book and the writer had used a comma, the copy editor would almost certainly remove it.
Thanks young man:)